Board Thread:Lores/@comment-31509000-20170614080316/@comment-31509000-20170614092447

DeltaMagnatude wrote: what happened to the grammar

a lot of cringy military dialogue for survivors despite no mention of military training prior to this story

tl;dr halfway due to no punctuation or paragraphing

several mispellings, but i dont care cause they're minor

some cringe galore moments

Summary:

'A pretty good story (even though I tl;dr'd halfway). A few improvements here and there, though.' Thanks for the feedback! I used military Dialouge after looking at the ranks titles in the game anyway I will improve!