Board Thread:Suggestions/@comment-30248084-20190402010007/@comment-30657087-20190402185148

on the constantly rotating chain part,

all of the "It's" is misused

you're not supposed to use the apostrophe when you're talking about a thing itself (or a creature/zombie)

It's (with an apostrophe) means "It is"

ex of what it reads in your paragraph:

The Cleaver's chainsaw remains active until it is death

while without the apostrophe, "Its", refers to a thing itself

(when i use the word "It's" i usually type it out as "its" as a lazy non-grammar thing)

i mention this because you're misusing it multiple times and there hasnt been one where it's been used correctly