Board Thread:Map Submissions/@comment-44943431-20200128013152/@comment-38527930-20200130015530

Well, you've created quite the map. I love the steampunk-esque aesthetics. However, there are a number of things you may want to consider.

Combined part instances (easier to see in-game):


 * The centre of the chandelier: https://gyazo.com/738928579a5bd4c19c2de27608de65c5


 * The stones below my avatar and to the left: https://gyazo.com/c1927b441e7d5422a345ace271722c1f


 * Inside the sink: https://gyazo.com/c7f856d40a9484c737de0411872d72b5

These items (the food, boxes, and small stones) are all facing the same direction. Rotating them a bit to create variation would create a more natural look.


 * Food: https://gyazo.com/491189a156a02bc9fa62be1dd94e46c0


 * Stones: https://gyazo.com/b8c97e6e346590f833ea8ed5741a450a


 * Boxes: https://gyazo.com/c928c9052dd5940df02142ecdb948434

Misplaced part errors:


 * Boxes sticking through wall: https://gyazo.com/f3c80d7362117e345c7c2d5b02e25e98


 * Broken lamp: https://gyazo.com/eeb608a2a5a62d96fb7188d3d437d0e2 As a side note to this, I don't believe this ceiling meets the 14 stud minimum height. As another side note, I can see that the lamps are probably non-collideable because of the low ceiling, which is understandable. However, the other lamps across the map do not need to be non-collideable, too.
 * The baseboards extend into the door: https://gyazo.com/70c217e2631f4116c86e2d440bb31811


 * The bridge parts extend through the rocks: https://gyazo.com/d83e9ecdf92b511fd4c88a75dc39039e


 * There is a gap in this railing: https://gyazo.com/85d17b06d3218650863f382fbdacbe4b The railing is also rather basic and blocky.


 * The bridge is not lined up correctly in the centre: https://gyazo.com/adbf0f991784b88b1c72349aeaac0037


 * How am I supposed to sit here? https://gyazo.com/46fe8b5d4fa84c8b9b89ca892f716ec6


 * Missing railing: https://gyazo.com/eb5547823537b4b6a7748ac4fa238cab

Things that affect gameplay:


 * The rungs on this ladder are too far apart. You can't climb it: https://gyazo.com/6e9670d120e53e916d68741bfc7e16c8


 * It would be nice if these cattails were non-collideable. It would make more sense to be able to walk through them. Plus, they just get in the way right now: https://gyazo.com/a5768aec9794f23146de92e620497df1


 * There are insivible blocks right in front of my character and in the roof of the gazebo. Of course, you can't see them in the photograph because they're invisible: https://gyazo.com/96d0928342367ab4b8132060739395cb

From a design standpoint:


 * Why on earth would someone have target practice dummies set up on the roof here? It's too close to offer any sort of challenge (My aim is horrendous, and even I could hit these targets): https://gyazo.com/05bbc5c1aef09db64a3bf59b5f99b0a4


 * If this place is abandoned, there's no reason for this lamp to be lit: https://gyazo.com/bc5b5cfbfd30a63d1a7e475f80bbe9a2


 * Not sure what this thing is: https://gyazo.com/f044c4edb8d3d721f5edff8b0f1e15ab


 * This statue is completely out of place. It has a much different look than everything else in the map, since it's much more realistic: https://gyazo.com/68226033fea766caa7beb0000f6c07e6


 * As far as I can tell, there is no car in the map that this hub cap would fit: https://gyazo.com/64ec3176bde79b4909e634f1cc9f8c40


 * Hard to capture in a picture, but this bush is super trippy. If you walk around it, you'll see what I mean: https://gyazo.com/eae63741d611d3dad10750d01ce15114


 * This table is very hard to see, since it is the same colour and material as the background: https://gyazo.com/db700a09a6ee63e0caf56bbf735eeb79

It's a really cool map, but it needs revision. You might want to test your creations before you submit them. It would also help to place zombie ladders and more normal ladders. Keep up the good work!

P.S. Sorry about all the gyazo links. This reply would have taken up way too much space if I had uploaded the pictures to the wikia. Also, sorry if I messed up the links somehow. I believe I posted them correctly, but this is the first time I've used Gyazo, so we'll see.