Board Thread:Fan Content/@comment-35522741-20181022163533/@comment-35522741-20181022225617

Erhixon wrote: The story is all messed up.

The characters and their abilities, personalities, etc are very unclear

There's really no definitive theme that you can see here.

Just a bunch of stuff is thrown around randomly and hopes to makes sense (spoiler: it doesn't)

Overall, it's bad in a story perspective, though if you tried to be funny by using this kind of comic stuff, well it doesn't really work out. Attention-wise, you did get it but not in a good manner.

So um yeah, here's my constructive criticism, just try to be good, have some sense and other things.

Don't take this personally or as an attack, take it as a lesson.

Thanks i was legit doing it to test how shit my MS paint skills are but thanks :)